Deviation Actions
Literature Text
Length: 9 pages.
Context: This scene takes place about halfway through a feature-length "Supergirl and Batgirl" script and it's mostly self-contained. The story in the script itself takes place just a couple of weeks after Kara's arrival on Earth, and even if she spends most of the time being upbeat, quirky, and funny, it's obvious that she hasn't quite dealt with the pain of what happened to her.
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INT. BATCAVE - NIGHT BATGIRL Okay, forget about all that. We need to deal with this. SUPERGIRL Deal with what? BATGIRL You, Krypton. All that happened to you and all your emotions about it. We need to deal with it right now. SUPERGIRL There's nothing to deal with. That's my problem, not yours. BATGIRL It might be your problem, but it's a problem you can't just ignore hoping it will go away on its own. SUPERGIRL Look, I... I know sometimes it... the feelings... overwhelm me, okay. I know that. But I got it under control, I swear. BATGIRL It's not about that, Kara. It's not about you getting things under control. You lost everyone and everything you knew and loved -- SUPERGIRL (angrily) I'm aware of that. BATGIRL NO ONE, absolutely no one expects you to just walk it off and forget about all you went through. I mean it. Batman lost his parents when he was a child and he's never gotten over it. And that was more than 20 years ago. No one can seriously expect you to just get over living through the apocalypse like it was just a bad dream. ------------------------------------------------------ 2. SUPERGIRL The past is the past! It's gone. It's over. There's nothing I can do to change it. Yes, it hurts like crazy just to think about it, but I cannot let the pain control me for the rest of my life. I have to focus on the future and let the past go. I need to live my life. I need to -- BATGIRL Well, yes, that's the right attitude and everything, but the problem is that you're not dealing with your emotions. You're just repressing them. That's not healthy. That's the exact opposite of healthy. That's how super-villains are born. You need to properly deal with those emotions of yours or they're going to make your head explode. Supergirl calms down a bit. Batgirl puts her hand on Supergirl's shoulder. BATGIRL Kara, I'm only trying to help you. SUPERGIRL (beat) How? ...How do I deal with the emotions? BATGIRL You cannot pretend that the past never happened. That's for sure. What you have to do is to focus on the good memories. The HAPPY memories. Remember all the people that you loved and the things that made you love them in the first place. Yes, at first it will be painful because every time you think about it, the bad memories will come rushing in and take over. But the more you think about the good memories, the less the bad memories will hurt, and the less overwhelming they will be. Supergirl looks like she's trying very hard to hold back the tears. ------------------------------------------------------ 3. Batgirl hugs her. BATGIRL Come one, Kara. Tell me a happy story. Don't worry if it makes you cry. I'm here for you, okay? Supergirl takes a step back and takes a deep breath. SUPERGIRL A happy story? Er... Yeah, I know one. It looks pretty grim at first, but it has a happy ending. It happened about six months ago. Well, about thirty years and six months in real time. Uncle Jor-el and aunt Lara were going to some meeting with the council, trying to convince them to do something about, you know, the planet being on the verge of exploding and everything. And of course, they called me to babysit Kal while they were out. So, I'm there, all alone, just me and Kal, kinda freaked out because all the stuff I've been hearing from my dad and uncle Jor-el, and all the earthquakes and stuff. And then, to make it all worse, baby Kal starts crying. INT. JOR-EL'S HOME - NIGHT - FLASHBACK Kara in her kryptonian clothes holds BABY KAL-EL in her arms. KAL-EL is CRYING. SUPERGIRL (VO) I have no idea why he's crying and nothing I do makes him stop. I tried feeding him, playing with him, singing to him, tickling him, everything. He just wouldn't stop crying. INSERT VARIOUS SHOTS of Kara trying a dozen different ways to make the baby stop crying. SUPERGIRL (VO) After half an hour I start to get desperate. I have no idea what to do. (MORE) ------------------------------------------------------ 4. SUPERGIRL (VO; CONT'D) I even think about calling a doctor because there's clearly something very wrong with Kal. Then I think, "doh! Maybe he just dirtied his diaper." Kara sets the baby down on a large table in the living room. SUPERGIRL (VO) So I put him on the living-room table and take his diaper off. But it's clean. That wasn't it. But maybe he just didn't like that particular diaper. I was getting desperate, so I decide to change it anyway. So I go to aunt Lara's room to get a new one. We don't need to see the naked baby, but we do see Kara taking off the baby's diaper. She growls at the diaper (it's clean). And the baby continues to cry. Then she heads for a door on the right side of the living room. INT. JOR-EL'S HOME - MASTER BEDROOM - FLASHBACK Kara enters the bedroom and heads for the closet. SUPERGIRL (VO) And then it happens. An earthquake happens. Everything starts shaking so violently that Kara gets thrown to the floor next to the wall. SUPERGIRL (VO) An earthquake. At that point is was the strongest earthquake in the history of Krypton. The shaking was so strong it threw me down to the floor. The lights go out and everything goes pitch dark. We can still hear the rumbling of the earthquake. SUPERGIRL (VO) Then the lights go out. All over the city. I couldn't see a thing, and everything was shaking. I was so scared I started crying. It lasted just over three minutes, but it felt like an hour to me. (MORE) ------------------------------------------------------ 5. SUPERGIRL (VO; CONT'D) When the shaking finally stopped, I was in the corner of the room, scared half to death. All I could think of was the stuff my dad and uncle Jor-el were talking about the week before, how the planet was going to fall apart at any moment. INT. BATCAVE - NIGHT SUPERGIRL Then I heard the oddest, scariest explosion I had ever heard. In my mind, as scared as I was, I thought the planet had just broken in half, and any second now the floor was going to split apart and lava would start flowing everywhere. A beat. SUPERGIRL And then I heard baby Kal crying in the living room. I had completely forgotten about him. There he was, all alone, half naked because I just took his diaper off to change him. And he was going to die. And he was going to die alone thinking that I had abandoned him. INT. JOR-EL'S HOME - MASTER BEDROOM - FLASHBACK Lights are still out, so we can only barely see a shape cowering in the corner of the room. Both Kara and baby Kal- el are crying. SUPERGIRL (VO) And now all I could think about was that I wasn't going to let that baby die alone. No matter what, I had to reach him, I had to hold him in my arms. I had to let him know that he wasn't alone, that I hadn't just abandoned him. If we were going to die, we'd die together. Kara's barely visible shape slowly craws toward the door of the room. ------------------------------------------------------ 6. SUPERGIRL (VO) So I start crawling back to the living room. I was so scared I couldn't even stand up. So there I was, crawling on my hands and knees, inching my way back to the living room, forcing myself to keep going no matter how scared I was because I just couldn't let baby Kal die thinking I had abandoned him. INT. JOR-EL'S HOME - LIVING ROOM - FLASHBACK The barely visible shape of Kara approaches the barely visible shape of the table where baby Kal-el still was (despite all the shaking a moment earlier). SUPERGIRL (VO) Then the lights come back on and I see what really happened. The lights come back on. We see Kara crawling on the floor. Her face is a mask of fear and tears. Kara looks up at something behind the camera. Her expression slowly morphs into surprise, confusion, then into a silly grin. INT. BATCAVE - NIGHT BATGIRL Okay, enough with the dramatic pause. What DID happen? SUPERGIRL That explosion I heard before. The one I thought was the sound of Krypton breaking in half. It was the baby. He just farted. Batgirl chuckles. BATGIRL Baby Superman farted? SUPERGIRL Yes. And it wasn't just air in the fart. It was one of those "farts with extra content" -- I don't know how you call them here on Earth. (MORE) ------------------------------------------------------ 7. SUPERGIRL (CONT'D) And he wasn't wearing a diaper at the time so there was nothing stopping the contents from moving freely. INT. JOR-EL'S HOME - LIVING ROOM - FLASHBACK We never get to see the mess, we only see Kara sitting on the floor, staring at it with a mix of surprise, admiration, and relief on her face. SUPERGIRL (VO) Let's just say the mess reached all the way to the window ten feet away from him. The mess was so gigantic and so disgusting it was hilarious. It was down right artistic. I'm not kidding you. I was thinking that I really needed to take a pic of it so I could convince uncle Jor-el that I totally deserved triple my babysitting salary just for having to clean it up. Kara starts chuckling to herself. And slowly (as the voice over speaks), the chuckling turns into full-blown laughter. SUPERGIRL (VO) Then the absurdity of it all just hit me. How scared I was just a moment ago. How I was sure I was going to die. How silly it was that I thought a baby's fart was the end of the world. And how that tiny baby had made such a humongous mess. I just started laughing like a maniac. Tears continue to stream down Kara's face as she continues to laugh. SUPERGIRL (VO) And then Kal started laughing too. Baby Kal-el starts laughing. SUPERGIRL (VO) Because it was all that gas that was making him cry before, and he heard me laughing so he decided to join me. ------------------------------------------------------ 8. Kara stops laughing and turns to the baby (whom we cannot see because he's still half naked, so we're not showing him). Kara looks like someone having a religious experience. She's smiling, but tears flow down her face like a river. SUPERGIRL (VO) And that baby's laughter was the sweetest, warmest, nicest, most beautiful sound I had ever heard. INT. BATCAVE - NIGHT SUPERGIRL Whenever I feel... overwhelmed, I try to remember that laughter. It was so sweet. It always makes me feel better. BATGIRL That's good. (beat) So that's your happy memory, eh? SUPERGIRL Of course, it'll be a lot happier once I tell it in the middle of a Justice League meeting. Batgirl bursts into laughter. BATGIRL Please please please make sure -- SUPERGIRL (smirking) That Batman and Wonder Woman are there, yes, of course. And I'm drawing pictures of the mess he made. And if Kal keeps getting bossy with me I'm turning everything into a youtube video. They both share a laugh. Then Supergirl's face turn a bit serious. SUPERGIRL ....Thanks. I... I have to admit it made me feel better telling you that story. ------------------------------------------------------ 9. BATGIRL Good. Healing is slow and a bit painful. But you will heal. Just keep focusing on the happy memories, okay. (beat) So... you were Superman's babysitter, eh? SUPERGIRL Yep. I wiped his butt so many times you would not believe it.
This is just an early draft of a scene from a feature-length "Supergirl and Batgirl" script I'm working on. I posted this just to make the point of how badly they botched Supergirl's backstory in the New 52. Specifically the fact that DC comics seemed to have forgotten that Kara literally survived the end of her world and all that it should have implied. There had been at least three times when they had done a flashback to the days before the end of Krypton and showed Kara's life, and it all could be aptly described as "the happy-go-lucky days before the end of the world."
Both Kara's father and her uncle knew their world was about to explode. Both were certain enough and desperate enough to send their only children (one of whom is a baby) to an unknown world just in the off chance that they might survive the impending and completely unavoidable death of their world. Yet absolutely nothing is happening to the planet itself. No earthquakes, No massive volcano eruptions. No signs that anything even slightly unusual might be about to happen.
I'm not complaining about the lack of realism in the idea that a planet might not show a single visible sign that anything is wrong until the day it explodes. My problem is that there's no drama in doing that. Batman and Spider-man get a lot of mileage out of the tragedy in their backstories, while Kara, who survived the end of the world, gets virtually nothing. In the new 52 version of Kara, she lands on Earth not only without any clue that Krypton is gone, but with no reason to think that there might have been anything wrong with it in the first place.
Adding tragedy to the last months of Kara's life on Krypton would serve two purposes:
1. It would give Kara a great motivation to be a hero. She knows all too well what it feels like to be on the wrong side of a disaster story. She knows how weak and helpless you feel when the world is falling apart and there's nothing you can do to save yourself. She knows all too well what it feels like to cry for a hero to come and save you, and how your heart sinks when no hero ever comes. And now that she has powers, now that she isn't helpless anymore, she won't let anyone feel like that.
2. It gives Kara perspective. In another feature-length script I'm working on starring Supergirl, Kara loses a fight against the villains, and a friend of hers tries to cheer her up, thinking she'd get depressed over it. Kara's response is essentially: "Why would that bother me? It doesn't even make it to the top 50 of the worst things that have happened to me in the last six months of my life."